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i love the eye makeup, very nice

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under my umbrella

I'm an accomplished exile.
:iconcgodfrey:
Save for that damned blurry blade of grass, I like it. Not much I'd do to change it.
:iconrecreation:
But what would you change?
Id love to hear it though.
:iconcgodfrey:
Well, keep in mind I do more commercial photography, where small things such wrinkles, or folds of skin are airbrushed out.

In PS, I'd probably have warmed up her skin a bit, although then I'd have to change the color or her make up, and I'd probably add some color to her lips, too. But thats more because I'm used to glamour/fashion type photography.

But the big thing (which happens to be something that can't be changed) is that blade of grass. I guess you'd just have to watch out for that during shooting, next time. Although the more I look at it, the less it distracts me, since I tend to focus on the eye.
:iconcgodfrey:
Giggle at me, huh? :P

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November 14, 2007
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D70s
1/400 second
F/10.0
38 mm
500
Oct 12, 2007, 2:28:52 AM

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